Do you like travel writing books, blogs or just enjoy reading? A few may know I have already published one book about our travels and I am well into a sequel.
Meanwhile I started, and nearly completed another book based on our travels in a smaller motorhome through France and Italy to Sicily and back. It languishes on my computer. 420 paperback pages that should be 300!
I need a few readers who are willing to provide critical comments on this initial rough draft. Is it too bloggy? Lacks a story? Cluttered by this is where we went and what we did? About as exciting as someone's holiday snaps? Shallow and uninspiring? What is irrelevant and just plain boring? Should whole sections be cut? What does and doesn’t work for you?
If you’re up for it and feel you can do it in a timely manner let me know here or by PM. The incentive is a free copy when published.
Keith
Meanwhile I started, and nearly completed another book based on our travels in a smaller motorhome through France and Italy to Sicily and back. It languishes on my computer. 420 paperback pages that should be 300!
I need a few readers who are willing to provide critical comments on this initial rough draft. Is it too bloggy? Lacks a story? Cluttered by this is where we went and what we did? About as exciting as someone's holiday snaps? Shallow and uninspiring? What is irrelevant and just plain boring? Should whole sections be cut? What does and doesn’t work for you?
If you’re up for it and feel you can do it in a timely manner let me know here or by PM. The incentive is a free copy when published.
Keith